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Frost

August 29, 2010
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Waiting to bear fruit,
An early winter has snatched
The promise of spring.

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  1. Rich permalink
    August 30, 2010 5:00 pm

    Nice haiku. Just experimenting with shorter forms or part of the aforementioned writer’s group?

    Boock: Just messing around with the forms. seeing what can be conveyed in as little as possible

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    • Rich permalink
      August 30, 2010 9:03 pm

      Obviously I’m gauging it against the other things you’ve posted since you started this blog, but there are several layers to this one. Perhaps if I read it independently I wouldn’t read as much into it. Or maybe I’d just perceive the subtext differently. Probably the latter.

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